01/02/2021
1. Write a 100-word paragraph describing how you use your cellphone every day using the following adverbs: never, always (x2), often, rarely, hardly ever, sometimes.
You must write your name at the end of your text.
01/02/2021
1. Write a 100-word paragraph describing how you use your cellphone every day using the following adverbs: never, always (x2), often, rarely, hardly ever, sometimes.
You must write your name at the end of your text.
I use my cell phone every day, sometimes I use it to investigate something, I use it more often to watch videos, series and movies. I always communicate on my cell phone so I use it the same way, I never take pictures because I don't like it. I always listen to music when I don't have something to do, I have almost never used my cell phone to see Facebook or social networks and I rarely have a cell phone with sound because I don't like it to ring and everyone finds out only when I have to set alarms
ResponderEliminarMy name is Daniel Pérez Fuentes.
Well done, Daniel.
EliminarJust a few corrections:
*I always communicate via/through my cell phone.
*I don't have anything to do.
You forgot to use*hardly ever*.
Overall, good work.
I always use my cell phone to play games and have fun with my friends and rarely for social networks because I hardly ever use them, I always watch movies on my cell phone, listen to music, but I never use it to watch my classes
ResponderEliminarI prefer to use the laptop because I pay more attention,
and I often have to charge the cell phone because sometimes I use the phone a lot
My name is Alexis Gomez
Great paragraph, Alexis!
EliminarI often use cell phone for music download And for see posts my social networks but
ResponderEliminari rarely my use for call to my Mom our my dad, i heardly ever use for it to send emails because I'm on vacation, but I always use it to watch videos on YouTube.
You didn't use all the adverbs in the instruction, but well done.
EliminarJust a few corrections:
*and to see posts in my social networks.
*I rarely use my celll phone to call my mom and my dad.
Remember to use academic writing (i -- I) and you misspelled hardly ever.
I always use my cell phone in applications such as social networks, whatsapp, Facebook, Instagram and Twitter, I also always use it for calls to my family or friends, I never use it to play video games or watch news, sometimes I use it to listen to music, rarely to watch videos and often to learn new things, I hardly ever use it for text messages.
ResponderEliminarWell done, Diego!
EliminarJust one correction:
If you have a lot of sentences, try to use periods (punto y seguido) to organize your ideas.
I always occupy my cell phone, there is not a day that I am not occupying it, when I wake up I always grab it to see the time or to check my social networks, sometimes it does not have a battery but I put it to charge, rarely the time I drop it or that it stretches me, but that if I have never lost it or it has been stolen from me, I often listen to music to do my homework because that way my time passes faster; when I am bored or depressed I hardly ever occupy it and I better do other things.
ResponderEliminarIn short, every day I have my cell phone at hand, even if I don't use it
My name is Karla Ivonne
Good work, Karla.
EliminarJust a few corrections:
*Sometimes it does not have battery (without a).
This sentence is a little bit confusing: [...]rarely the time I drop it or that it stretches me.
Remember to use periods to separate your ideas.